The following piece is available in the Winter 2002 edition of "The First Line," a quarterly literary magazine.


I couldn't recite it by memory, but I would never forget it. From the novel Hyperion by Dan Simmons: "The Hegemony Consul sat on the balcony of his ebony spaceship and played Rachmaninoff's Prelude in C-sharp Minor on an ancient but well-maintained Steinway while great, green, saurian things surged and bellowed in the swamps below."

A futuristic Canterbury Tales, Hyperion tells the stories of a Poet, Priest, Soldier, Diplomatic Consul, Detective, Scholar, and Starship Captain. They were selected to travel together on one final pilgrimage to the world of Hyperion to visit the mysterious and deadly being known as the Shrike. Each tale is indescribably original and inventive, and the words - Simmons paints like a master with words.

Some writers are great storytellers, can really keep you turning the pages, but are not great with the language. Others are great with the language, making your mouth water the way they work in words, but not great at telling a story. Simmons' Hyperion is the best combination I have seen of both. It's a wildly imaginative tale, at times grippingly sad (as in the Scholar's tale), at other times mysterious and dark (the Poet's tale). There's even a point where poet John Keats, from whose epic poem came the name for this book, becomes an integral character (the Detective's tale).

Simmons sets it up with a beautiful opening. He instantly establishes characterization and setting as we glimpse a diplomatic consul sitting in his ship, playing his piano on an alien world. We are there on this empty world, hearing this music, seeing this lone spaceship.

Simmons gives a sense of his style from the opening, showing his love of language. It's a long sentence, specific in detail, highlighting the style of the book to follow. Simmons clarifies the music playing (Rachmaninoff's Prelude in C-sharp Minor), the type of piano (Steinway, ancient but well-maintained), the color of the Consul's ship (ebony), the type of government in the galaxy (Hegemony), and a description of the creatures on this world (great, green, saurian things).

The detail serves as a hint into the mind of the Consul. It's through his eyes we read this sentence; he's aware of the type and age of piano on which he's playing (Steinway), the piece of music he's playing (Rachmaninoff), but he doesn't know the name or type of alien creatures flying around his ship (saurian things). We see an ordered and structured mind, one used to filing information for later use, as the case would be for a political consul.

Alliteration floats throughout the sentence: "balcony of his ebony..."; "played Rachmaninoff's Prelude..."; "great, green..."; "saurian things surged and bellowed in the swamps..."; "bellowed in the swamps below." These overlapping waves of alliteration flow off the tongue, making what is a long sentence something effortless to say. His predominance of soft consonants (g and s) also makes the sentence move easier.

Dan Simmons' Hyperion, like Keats' poem of the same name, is epic, beautiful to read, and filled with wonder. I have yet to find a greater combination of imagination, incredible storytelling, and poetic mastery of the language. Speed-reading teaches you not to sound out sentences, not to move your lips and pronounce each word. This should not be the case with Simmons as his style begs to be read aloud to savor the language. It ends as it begins, a celebration of language coursing through an intriguing, masterful story.

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